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He felt himself end at the end of her kiss.

Her lips shifted slowly against his own and he realized that her soft sigh was his funeral dirge, her whisper his end. In all fairness, he did not tell her he felt his death alive on her lips, but the panic that reflected perfectly in his eyes was hard to miss.

“What is it?”

As complete as his horror was, he lied. “Nothing. It’s Nothing.”
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Shortie - A short story/drabble that is written at the spur of the moment.

If you would like to add on to this story, please let me know :)

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It took me a while to figure this one out, but now that I've got it, it's and awesome job for something so short. Great job!

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Heh, yeah, you totally rock. :heart:
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Heh---thank you -snuggleluff-


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Be gentle with yourself. You are a child of the universe, no less than the trees and the stars. In the noisy confusion of life, keep peace in your soul. - Max Erhmann
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Thank you :D

Out of all my Shorties, this is the one that I like the least---but it seems to be sparking quite a few flames. I suppose because it is so simplistic people can take away anything they want from it---which I suppose is a good thing.


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Be gentle with yourself. You are a child of the universe, no less than the trees and the stars. In the noisy confusion of life, keep peace in your soul. - Max Erhmann
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Well as long as things don't get too open-ended, it's still an enjoyable read.

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